Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Alèe! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My breath is quite intense and raw, I shout, I scream; Alèe!
This was not how it was supposed to go, my Dear Alèe!
Oh God, what dreadful, vile disaster!
My one and Only; Dearest Master!
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Victoria Udnæs
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 November 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Victoria H. Very impressive. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bill Cantrell 22 November 2017

And a fine poem to be inspired by..Oh Captain! My Captain! Your poem is right up there with Walt Whitmans with a modern day wording, you did a wonderful job with this outstanding poem of yours! ! Full marks my friend.

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Victoria Udnæs

Victoria Udnæs

Oslo, Norway.
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