Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Akunyili Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the ding-dong calls from the dinette,
We no longer need fear the dingy dinner in a flat clean dish.
When I thirst, and I am thrifty,
The water in bottles no longer need be the only sure guarantee against diarhea, typhoid and other death mongers.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

It was a nice poem written with skill. The poem is rich in imagery. I liked it very much. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Warmest regards Akmal

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