Saturday, January 29, 2011

Akon Angel Comments

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Akon angel
Is the only black angel that lives in heaven
The rest of the angels are white
And the white angels finally got used to akon angel
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 28 June 2014

Hmmm...I was really enchanted and thought this poem was really great. Until I got to the end. There were so many wonderful places you could have taken this yet you ended it with something nonsensical? With the way the majority of the poem read I thought for sure there would be a great ending with a moral lesson at the closing. Big let down with this one!

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