Sunday, January 7, 2018

Akin And Contrast(Thanks Pramila Khadun For Inspiring Me To Write This Poem) Comments

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The sun, the clouds, the stars
all were telling her to move,
she went on moving,
overlooking someone,
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Khalida Bano Ali 06 September 2018

Such a nice poem! Very well penned.

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Indira Renganathan 10 January 2018

She noticed the beauty of a perfect contrast, like two opposite poles of a magnet...very good oxymoronic expression....matching poem for the nice photo

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

A lovely poem! My favorite lines: He could have spoken and he could have sung/but he preferred to remain silent/ rather someone who was deaf and dumb in love/neither he could listen to her joyful song……………..10

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Khalid Saifullah 08 January 2018

Contrasts are beautiful and attractive, an attractive poem.

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