Saturday, February 1, 2020

Akhtar, In Response To Your Poetic Message: ....[ Short; Inspired By " Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree ", By Akhtar Jawad ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your poem's 2nd line stumps** me good;
I'd rewrite it for YOU, Akhtar, if I could.
But mostly I find your poem to be fine.
I sip it from your pen like a sweet wine.
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Bri Edwards
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Anjandev Roy 20 February 2020

like a sweet wine........fantastic. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

Beautifully crafted write with great humor as always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

A lovely tribute to a great man. Akhtar Jawad is one of the great Poets of Poem Hunter. Most of his poems are imbued with wisdom and insight.

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 February 2020

Bri Edwards, lively and jovial.

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