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Akelapan

Akela hai tu, akela hi tujhe rahna parega

niceee i also write in thiss topic aapko zarur padhni chahiye meri poem :)

@utsav patel: thanks utsav..for apperication

@ramesh rai: thank you sir for your advice..

i not understood it compleat because i have only studied hindi in high school.but it is nice

Hindi mein likhna achhi baat hai. meri bhi kuchh kavitayen hindi men hai. you must read. lekin kuch hindi kavi usme purane style ka write dekhna chahate hai. jise tukbandi bhi kaha jata hai, jaise last word identical ho. jo main nahi karpata. Any way do not take it so. In my opinion that is old style. Mere anusar kavitaon mein bhavanaon ka prawah hona chahiye. ek baar mere face book mein adverse comment bhi aaya. I praise your endeavor. good write with good emotion. keep it up without caring any comment. but do not disturb your other work like study etc. only for poem. wish you all the best.

Hindi mein likhna achhi baat hai. meri bhi kuchh kavitayen hindi men hai. you must read. lekin kuch hindi kavi usme purane style ka write dekhna chahate hai. jise tukbandi bhi kaha jata hai, jaise last word identical ho. jo main nahi karpata. Any way do not take it so. In my opinion that is old style. Mere anusar kavitaon mein bhavanaon ka prawah hona chahiye. ek baar mere face book mein adverse comment bhi aaya. I praise your endeavor. good write with good emotion. keep it up without caring any comment. but do not disturb your other work like study etc. only for poem. wish you all the best.

Its very nice dear... Keep on work... Do good... :)

lonliness is a shelter/ good poem! !

oh why do u feel lonely every second eh?