Akelapan Comments

Yun dil ko kahun main Kya Ye tanha rehta hai Meri zindagi ka har din Yun is kadar hi basar hota hai......beautifully written poem......thank you for sharing :)

good one... keep writing

thank you for your reviews.......

Dear Abhishek you have tried to reveal deep sorrow of a loving heart if you write in equal length of verse, your feel will certainly be more effective. I invite you to read my poems and give your views. Thanks! Bless My Mother O my Lord! Bless my mother With a life of cheer Her badly wrinkled face And terribly old age Make me shiver with fear Is some disaster near? ........................ ...................... read more of it on my page and share with your friends.

thank youu that you have liked my poem very muchh...

Abishek, Aapki kavita pyari hai...Beautiful lines... ye dil khu b khud likh rha hai mai to bas zariyan hun iska Loved reading it...Keep writing.