Friday, June 17, 2011

Ajar Comments

Rating: 5.0

Close that door, son
For I am old and my bones are weak.
I've seen 89 under the sun
Journey's been long burning up my wick.
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Kimani wa Mumbi
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Elias Ng'ang'a K. 15 October 2017

Beautifully penned.

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Elias Ng'ang'a K. 15 October 2017

Beautifully penned.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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