It's not even a cute baby—
No cherubic redeeming qualities,
Just drool, set on course through
Gummy gap-toothed no return.
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Ha! I can feel the discomfort and little annoyances that make a flight into a desperate journey of akwardness.
Obviously, you got a great talent to be fully explored. With this well penned poem you have shown that you got what it takes to be a great poet and show it to the entire world...10+++Keep it up! Love and Peace...
A very good poem, discomfort, annoyances and disturbances.. flight, being in the air. so many points brought in well in this poem. than k you. very much. tony