Standing high on the rocky mountain top
She stands mesmerized by the beauty below
A sea of trees and fields spread out before her
Like the strokes from an ole masters brush
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Well written, a beautiful picture. I have something about these things, but it's funny as usual. When I find it, I'll inform you.
The imagery is excellent. I can see you on the top a mountain shouting, I am Air. Water and Fire.
Very beautiful poem. Air, water and fire are the source of power. Love it,10+
You are an artist, TJ, with brush in hand and the wisdom and insight to see what the ordinary person does not. With that brush you take us on an extraordinary journey. I will watch your work with joy! A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Beautiful and so perfectly descriptive that I felt like I was there. Thank you for sharing this with us!
immensely b'ful expressions n u got better words to express them......i jus luved it.......thanx a lot! ! !
A masterpiece not only as an artist with the brush but also with the pen. I like this one a lot well done.10/10 Regards Dave T
A beautifully composed piece about the elements, I will be reading more of your work, well done, 10 Lynda xx
I am air, water, fire; I am all things for her ............................................................. T, Very beautiful poem.... with graceful metaphors... You have delicately conceded your of favourite the fourth element... 10.. All best, Tsira