Thursday, September 24, 2009

Air On The Attack! Comments

Rating: 3.5

lurking and hidden
stranger beware
the scent of the night
on a midnight air
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M Rene Riel
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Adeline Foster 26 September 2009

Rene: Interesting poem and the lack of punctuation is appropriate for this piece. Even leaving off the initial capitalization works well in this case. Keep writing. Adeline

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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