Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Air, Oh! Air! ! Comments

Rating: 3.3

You are so gentle
And life giver, without you,
None, even the plants, flowers,
Friuts, and animals can survive,
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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL
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Chitra - 09 July 2008

well expressed, a lot to ponder upon lot to learn from nature's fury

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Analou Pabalate 04 November 2007

air is life..........and sometimes death...........tnxs!

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Tom J. Mariani 29 October 2007

I like your development of theme from a gentle wind to turbulance. Your lines about peaceful abodes to graveyards are excellent. The typos in the two lines before your final line are distracting. I think they should read 'have the beings done/To make you so furious, ' Other than that, another great poem.

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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