Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Air Of Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

the kneel
of
mercy blown in the thundering
angry heart and broke
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Antonio Liao
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Yelena M. 04 July 2009

A beautiful poetic description of the soul purification in these lines...Thanks for sharing! A.

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

Deep seeded melancholy illuminates from the poem with a unique theme that has been written very nicely grabs the readers attention. The ending has been made simplified with a message of adaptation that every pure and beautiful soul can achieve with comfort.........

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 June 2009

different feelings being expressed very soulful... touching every soul... 10++ lovelots, maia

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Catrina Heart 23 June 2009

Different in presentation and soulful mood you have penned...marvelous one..10+++

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