the kneel
of
mercy blown in the thundering
angry heart and broke
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Deep seeded melancholy illuminates from the poem with a unique theme that has been written very nicely grabs the readers attention. The ending has been made simplified with a message of adaptation that every pure and beautiful soul can achieve with comfort.........
different feelings being expressed very soulful... touching every soul... 10++ lovelots, maia
Different in presentation and soulful mood you have penned...marvelous one..10+++
A beautiful poetic description of the soul purification in these lines...Thanks for sharing! A.