Friday, August 31, 2007

Air Castles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yellow and orange dancing together as the breeze increases their flame
The sound of crackling wood and the essence of apple wood floats into the midnight blue
I am taken far away from the daily cares and woes
My mind begins to drift and I am lost in a waltz of thought
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Patricia Gale
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Bob Blackwell 28 August 2008

Such a lovely picture you have painted with some heart felt thoughts both will be wonderful memories in time to come. Great poem Patricia L Bob

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Nomi Mas 30 January 2008

beautiful

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Theresa Moore 23 December 2007

I love the glow and heavenly flow of this poem. An absolutely wonderful write.

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Thad Wilk 10 September 2007

Another excellent poem written! Patricia (a 10) ! ! Thad

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Meggie Gultiano 08 September 2007

So awesome! beautiful write, Pat..love it hugs, Meggie

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Geoff Warden 07 September 2007

Very nicely done Young Lady of poetic justice, such words could stop the hands of time and bring forth a dream or two.......I like the way ur writes reach out to the reader and take them by the hand as if u were within their present time and space delivering ur message as if talking to each and every one indavidually.....

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Vivacious, colourful and spirited. t x

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Patricia, so very romantic, and so filled with the essence of love! Beautiful write Theo

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