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She tumbled from the sky that night
White washed and too familiar
Holding cotton candy dreams
In her hand
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Just when A single stubborn tear Fell from Her eye................................................oh what a stunning metaphor that leads to redound to the gleams of light, passion when lost to riff of reason on the rune of dream, most ingenious write i always look for,10+++, thanks for sharing
great lines...quite ashooting star you sketched there on a vast canvas....ending in a single tear superb poem cheers
...a weaving of superb imagery, noble thoughts and a sympathetic heart. A beautiful poem.
Not being brave enough to ask why is what most of us humans succumb to, because we are not ready for those answers. Good writing. arya
I tend to think that it is rather that we do not know we are ready, not that we aren't. In fact, I'd argue that we're probably long overdue.
I like this poem You take words that look like they don't belong together and make sense out of them. Many of the writiers here, take words that don't belong together, but they don't make sense. You understand that.
She begged the world to take her in and it did. Now that's worth smiling about! Victorious!
OH my goodness...'apple pie and loneliness.' What an image to tug at the heartstrings. This has the exact dream quality that I love. You are such a poet. Raynette
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11/1/2025 3:12:21 AM # 1.0.0
She smiled, as the night Breathed her in Just when A single stubborn tear Fell from Her eye xlent write. top marks.