Friday, August 28, 2015

Air Balloon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is like an air balloon,
Looks so nice with so many colors on it’s wings.
But it is so greedy and hungry with love, lust and riches
That the more it gathers
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Amitava Sur
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Jaishree Nair 29 August 2015

Rich in imagery.creates visions vivid. Well articulated. Thanks for sharing

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Amitava Sur 11 September 2015

Thanks a lot for appreciating my poem

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Roseann Shawiak 29 August 2015

Fantastic imagery, Amitava! You summed up the stupidity and ignorance of many people in this amazing poem! Lust, money, greed, riches taking over people's lives while they leave morality, ethics and responsibility behind, not wanting any part of these things, just selfishly satisfying themselves only. Great poem of our times, Amitava! Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 11 September 2015

Thank you RoseAnn for your valued and thoughtful comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. So wisely and nicely depicted with marvellous introduction. thanks for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 11 September 2015

Thank you for appreciating this poem

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