Thursday, August 29, 2013

Air: A Love Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

We lay together,
Reclined in dark,
Your silhouette outlined
By ambient light,
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Charles Darnell
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2016

lie, not lay, my friend. right? i wish ice cream were as common as the air. BUT then there would SURELY me more of me to love! trove trōv/ noun noun: trove; plural noun: troves a store of valuable or delightful things. the museum's trove of antique treasure (thanks, Google) bri :)

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Noreen Carden 12 January 2014

Wow Charles i got goosebumps reading this beautiful love poem Every line is a perfect hymn of love.Great read i give it a ten

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Noreen Carden 12 January 2014

Wow Charles i got goosebumps reading this beautiful love poem Every line is a perfect hymn of love.Great read i give it a ten

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Lorraine Colon 07 October 2013

Beautiful reasons to love air. Very nicely done

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