Saturday, November 15, 2008

Air Comments

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A wisp of white smoke rises
floats, slowly twists around itself
it’s translucence casts barely a shadow
which dances lustily and slowly
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Jilted BUTTERFLY
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Heart Felt 17 November 2008

Love the imagery of this poem. You have captured something ordinary yet amazing. x

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