Air Comments
O' tricky children of the sphere
Mass of gasses and vapour dittoing to flare
Trickling through my nostrils to swear
That my life ever is you compounded air
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I felt revisiting this poem because I love reading it again and again. I quote: “O' smart invisible blare/Invisible, yet sun, moon, all twinkling to glare/Elated my eyes to swear/That my life ever is you compounded air”. You must have put your heart and soul in penning this elegant piece of poetry! Pray God bless you always dear madam…….10
An extraordinary poem. Without air we can't survive but air pollution is leading to so many disease. When will we stop polluting nature...
O' invisible painter Of azure and 'bow an aesthetic you bear Blown my mind enthralled to swear That my life ever is you compounded air....Wonderful expression! Its an adorable piece of poetry! Thanks dear madam for sharing....10
A beautiful poem on the atmosphere, Indira Ranganathan's skill of writing poems is shining throughout the poem.
Indira, your poems are always a joy to read..This one just floats on the air in its lightness and flow..Thanks for sharing. With best wishes, Yelena.
remarkable flow of words, feelings and images! I loved it,10+++ and thanks for words about my poem, i really appreciate it! regards
they way you stairize the human race in its race...beautiful fresh approach and a clarion call great poetry cheers
A very beautiful concept Indira! 'I breathe in and I breathe out and they call life; I am certain one day it stops? Thank you so much for your prompt comment on my scribbling.
Each stanza is like a fresh air caressing our face. The air which our ancestors preserved is becoming now scary - the last lines ring the alarm to make us set things aright.
so much to see within the air if we take the the time to stand and stare. magical.....John
a lovely poem on air...thank you mam for your lovely comment on'thiruvalluvar....' please read my 'is it a recession', 'the oldest love', ...'the chemotherapy'... ' arare commodity'
very nice! I feel it's better if we read this poem while listen to Bach's Air on G string. keep writing! Dear, friend. Would you like to read and comment on my newest poem, Lost Forest's Ancient Chant, please? Thank you very much.
the invisible yet the vital element= avery good write- thanks mam for your comment on my never ending story- read my poem manu's varna
VERY NICE AND THOUGHT PROVOKING. READ MY NEW POEM AND SENS YOUR COMMENTS NEW BATTLE OF LIFE
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O' smart invisible blare Invisible, yet sun, moon, all twinkling to glare Elated my eyes to swear That my life ever is you compounded air - - A fascinating piece work! My pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam!