Ain't No Sunshine Comments

Genice, this is so lovely! Don't know if you're old enough to remember it (unless you listen to Oldies Music, or had a parent who played this song) , but Bill Withers had a blue-sy song ' Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone' that was quite famous. Your last bit sounds similar. You could watc/ listen to the song on youtube. Keep writing great poetry!

wet and misty looking into the sky, good job

Such a beautiful poem, Genice....10++++++