Monday, October 24, 2022

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Nineteen ninety one, at the age of six saw the frenzied dance of the cyclone
In the atrocious dark of the night, we were out of sleep, fighting with wild storm
We heard the scream of people, lost our tin shed whole roof with the garret zone
On the waist of uncle I cried out for safe shelter but everyone was in unsafe mourn
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2022

It's a brilliant poem... well penned.5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 24 October 2022

In the light of the next day I forgot......beautifully penned...

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 October 2022

Beautiful pen picture of the natural event in contrast with the normal life, Mahtab. With best wishes/PC

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