Wednesday, August 31, 2022

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I want to draw eternal kisses on the vermilion of flowers
I wake up with a sip of tea crag to catch the full moon
Poetry of certainty calls me to your lenient body in the drowsy night
In the civilization of the sun, I travel future with the dress of a pilgrimage
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2022

A great word play! Beautifully penned. The beauty of language is illustrated really well!

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Richard Wlodarski 02 September 2022

Some beautiful flowery imagery! Top marks, Mahtab!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 August 2022

Brilliant Write Mahtab Bravo! top five

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 August 2022

Excellent poem... keep it up!

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