Friday, February 13, 2009

Aimless Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

AIMLESS DEATH


And so the sparrow falls
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robert delucchi
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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

I believe the same life force or consciousness runs through us all, so why try to kill it? Your beautiful poem describes the irony of this so well. Thank you

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Alf Hutchison 05 April 2009

Robert this is simply great penmanship...don't you ever stop writing...10 again

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