“I am sad today”
Do not come on the way
Go away and leave me alone
All our sweet days have gone
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David Coffee1 hour ago I like the flow of the poem however, I am struggling with overall meaning of the poem. At some point it seem as thou two people a male and a femal are communcating and the female is try to comfort the male but the female at some point becomes angry and the male than become concern about the female. Not sure The way the poem starts out capture me but I began to wayne as it progress. I felt a bit lost who was speaking or what was taking place as the poem progressed. Comment 1 Comment+1 IT's ok Darreus Wheeler1 hour ago I fell like the rhyme you were usin
BEAUTIFUL VERSE Nick Adegwe-Oshomah58 minutes ago Well composed. Nice work Comment +1 Insightful crystal1 hour ago This has beautiful hidden meanings behind its words. Thank you for your thoughts. Comment +1 very good doreka vaughn1 hour ago **** Comment +1 Consoling a friend