Aim High Comments

Excellent write with strong determination to reach

I like all stanzas very much, but one is most striking, I cite that here: I write my aim in papers And attach them to the claws Of singing birds Let them fly Bring it to the sky...........................True mesmerizing read and a very excellent poem, brilliantly told. Well worded and fascinatingly rendered. A Full 10 for this Beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this scintillating poem.

An inspiring poem that speaks of the need of hope positivity and confidence in life. Beautiful write, as always 10+

My aim is high As high as the moon And stars above It is almost At the tip of my hand But slips away in an instant.........this is the first stanza which means a lot. Aim of life should be high. The fruit is not in our hand. We should go on performing righteous deeds having high aims. A beautiful poem nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

As strong is your aim so high you fly.... it all depends upon how strong we pursue....nice thought crafted into a good poem, , , thank you Rose- -10

you use an appropriate words in this poem that makes it more wonderful.

A beautifully written inspirational poem. +++10

An aimless life is a journey without a destination. Thoughtful poem.

This is a magnificent poem Rose. Loved all the stanzas. A 10 :)

Let them fly! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

An aimless life is like a radar less navigator! You have beautifully depicted the concept in this excellent poem Rose! ....10

“I shout my aim from the top of the hills mountains“... it reminds me when i was in PH, i did😃

a wonderful and inspirational poem of forever keeping one's focus on what they truly believe? .............well written Rose

Wow, Rose Marie... your poem inspires my life... a big 10+++