Saturday, February 18, 2017

Ailing Wood Comments

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The adolescent in robes of Jamaican lude,
Strip him! Strip him!
Futility reigns, the heavens beckon
For their lost creature of beguile.
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Riano Harp
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Paul Brookes 20 February 2017

I enjoyed this It had depth the poet really knew and cared about the subject so that is shone through good rhytm and word usage A well wrought poem on the whole.

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