Aik Nazam Comments

bohat pyara kalaam hy. yaad, harf harf jab, sher, main bun'nay lagoon. ghumaan karoon, kisi qadar, woh bhi bheegti hogi.

Kitni ajeeb si baat hey Ke kalam mein itni taqat hey Sochon se rang chura ke Kaghaz peh bkhair deta hey beautiful write

Aik Nazam by Jasmeen Khan is a good poem/kalam mein itni taqat hey, Sochon se rang chura ke, Kaghaz peh bkhair deta hey // Courage of the pen that steals the colours from the thought and paints on the paper very nice Jasmine

Tehreer k bandhano ko wushato me dakel deta hai.... le k apni yadon k anchal me, sath rang baker deta hai... ankh jub num ho meri uski yadh me, lga k gale, meri zindagi me khushiyan samo deta hai....... bin bulaye mere dil me utar k gumgen lamhat ko furhat bukhsh deta hai... Sochon se rang chura ke Kaghaz peh bkhair deta hey.......beautiful poem sis, keep on sharing

... and these more lines are very good!

rang chura ke, good poem, thanks.