Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Aids - Its Your Call Comments

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Spread love, never hatred
As a child – advices from the learned
Today, no more applicable
AIDS - all being vulnerable
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Girija Menon
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Saadat Tahir 08 December 2009

very well written... purposeful and informative nice choice of words and flow.. overall v good.....u have forced me to wonder why i did not write a poem about it.... cheers and ten

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Henry Brown 01 December 2009

My country has the highest number of Aids carriers per capita in the world. Your poem has a song hidden in there waiting to break out and deliver the message. My view is that there is only one true way to stop Aids. Not a condom but to teach people what God says one man one woman in marriage

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Vijay Menon 01 December 2009

its a very informative poem highlighting the danger of the dreaded AIDS thanks for sharing and regarding the poem its very good

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Ying Escalona 01 December 2009

i wondered why someone is happy o have AIDS.but now i knew... AIDS - Additional Income Derived from Sideline :)

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