Spread love, never hatred
As a child – advices from the learned
Today, no more applicable
AIDS - all being vulnerable
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My country has the highest number of Aids carriers per capita in the world. Your poem has a song hidden in there waiting to break out and deliver the message. My view is that there is only one true way to stop Aids. Not a condom but to teach people what God says one man one woman in marriage
its a very informative poem highlighting the danger of the dreaded AIDS thanks for sharing and regarding the poem its very good
i wondered why someone is happy o have AIDS.but now i knew... AIDS - Additional Income Derived from Sideline :)
very well written... purposeful and informative nice choice of words and flow.. overall v good.....u have forced me to wonder why i did not write a poem about it.... cheers and ten