lahja gulab sa nah zubaaN shabnami rahi
baqi rahi tou sirf tiree barhami rahi
aaina-e wafa pe raha ik Gubaar sa
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काश मैं तेरी बेवफाई को पहले ही समझ पाती शायद तुझे परखने में कोई कमी रह गई!
waise tou zindagee ne mujhe kya nahiN diya phir bhi yeh lag raha hai kahiN kuch kami rahi......Kyunki Sab k sath Kuch tha Islie us Kuch ki wajah se lagta h ki kami hai......Beautiful poem....loved it.....thank you for sharing :)
Kuch kami rahi! With the eyes of Beauty telling it all. Great piece of work.
phir choR dena saath bus itna bata mujhe meree moHabbatoN meN kahaN kya kami rahi 1000++++
Outstanding Ghazal...Har ek sher ek moti ki tarah hai aur puri nazm ek nayaab Motiyon ki mala.....Masha-Allah, Shri Gurmeet ke kya khoob gaya isse....Kash Mehdi Hasan Sahab ki Aawaz mil gayi hoti.....1000++++
aaina-e wafa pe raha ik Gubaar sa ik gard-e bewafaii jami ki jami rahi ..... Beautiful lines.