Thursday, February 18, 2016

Ai Aarzoo Woh Shakhs Badalta Hai Rut Ke Saath! Comments

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lahja gulab sa nah zubaaN shabnami rahi
baqi rahi tou sirf tiree barhami rahi

aaina-e wafa pe raha ik Gubaar sa
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Uzefa Rashida M.a 20 February 2016

aaina-e wafa pe raha ik Gubaar sa ik gard-e bewafaii jami ki jami rahi ..... Beautiful lines.

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Kavya . 19 February 2016

काश मैं तेरी बेवफाई को पहले ही समझ पाती शायद तुझे परखने में कोई कमी रह गई!

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Kavya . 19 February 2016

ek dhool thee jo ruKh pe jami ki jami rahi wah bahut khoob!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 February 2016

waise tou zindagee ne mujhe kya nahiN diya phir bhi yeh lag raha hai kahiN kuch kami rahi......Kyunki Sab k sath Kuch tha Islie us Kuch ki wajah se lagta h ki kami hai......Beautiful poem....loved it.....thank you for sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2016

Kuch kami rahi! With the eyes of Beauty telling it all. Great piece of work.

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M Asim Nehal 18 February 2016

phir choR dena saath bus itna bata mujhe meree moHabbatoN meN kahaN kya kami rahi 1000++++

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M Asim Nehal 18 February 2016

Outstanding Ghazal...Har ek sher ek moti ki tarah hai aur puri nazm ek nayaab Motiyon ki mala.....Masha-Allah, Shri Gurmeet ke kya khoob gaya isse....Kash Mehdi Hasan Sahab ki Aawaz mil gayi hoti.....1000++++

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