Ahalya The Winner Comments

Five *s for this gem

So profound thoughts and inspiring words. Insightful poem. Dwells effectively on the theme of wronged woman. May I invite you to read my poem on Ahalya, "And Silence Is What I Choose "…

A great love poem. So he had you and then left and then no new suitors because you had already been had, but now you appreciate your inner beauty, the guy wants you back, but he has lost you forever. Epic story.

Nice and thought provoking composition.

But you stone hearted Gautama! You lost my heart for ever; you lost the battle you had won. Didn't you lose your love? Didn't you lose your life? You lived the rest of your life with a lifeless stone heart- a living dead you are

So, I the Ahalya announce today ' I am the winner and you the Gautama- the greatest loser forever! '. Fine poem.10++

Witty reflection written with clarity of thought and mind. Heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Namita.

But you stone hearted Gautama! You lost my heart for ever; you lost the battle you had won. Didn't you lose your love? Didn't you lose your life? You lived the rest of your life with a lifeless stone heart- a living dead you are! - - - A great write choosing metaphor from epic Ramayan .Thanks for sharing.

Write comment. Great start, Rani. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

emotions and dynamics of emotions beautifully narrated..thank you poet !

dynamic of emotions beautifully narrated.thank you poet !

Lying as a lifeless stone I searched every nook and corner like a musk deer; but like a thirsty traveler in the desert found nothing but mirage. Beautiful description of a woman's torture by er lover. Great effort. Thanks poet. 10+++