Thursday, May 26, 2005

Ahab And Your White Whale1 Comments

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I can see your age underneath
all that pain, its like a moving
star, that shows up every week
or month, its a warning, a full
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 26 May 2005

Very Nice poem, David.Liked the full moon comparison and the ending.Well written.Thank you.

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Mary Nagy 26 May 2005

'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger........' That's always been one of my favorite sayings! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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