Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Ah Youth! Comments

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The young atendant twirls his keys
then loses them in the pool's deep end.

It is the third time he has done it,
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Neil Crawford
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Michael Morgan 20 March 2012

Why do you specify 'male' when the definite pronoun tells the gender of the attendent, as it should? Isn't that redundant? It clogs the line and weakens an otherwise nice poem.

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Neil Crawford

Neil Crawford

CHESTER, ENGLAND.
Neil Crawford
Neil Crawford
CHESTER, ENGLAND.
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