Tuesday, December 1, 2009

....Ah......Wrinkle Wrinkle Little Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wrinkle wrinkle little star
How far from smooth
You really are,
I've wished upon you
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Ken e Hall
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Walterrean Salley 28 October 2012

Lol. We must brave the realities of life, which are not always so pleasant. Wrinkling is a tough one for anybody. Very amusing.

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Dulakshi Wakista 14 February 2010

Bravo! You're a great poet. After reading your poem my mind refreshed.Mindblowing friend! .I enjoyed so much.

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Nikunj Sharma 15 December 2009

Aah..those wrinkles...wonderfully rhymed...some of them may get ironed out now.this one had me laughing out loud...good one again from a wrinkling maestro

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Jesurobo-owie Gift Imafidon 10 December 2009

very funny poem.a tales of the worries of old age.nice one mate!

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2009

hi Ken, please see what's there on the right of your page...they have surgical remedies and specil creams...which one would you like to have? i think the software installed by ph reads the poems first...may be it posts inside a review and rating who knows...the ad firms always are at point advantage and comimg to your poem, i liked it very much...what's poetry if there is no humour sarcasm or subtility? nice sharing...10

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 December 2009

AH... Wrinkles, wrinkles, wrinkles, this old star [me] still shines.I enjoyed reading this poem-since I can relate-for such is life and when one sees it withering on your forehead; underneath your eyes, Its frightening! . We cannot roll back time but we sure can try to enhance the lines.Good read and a10

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Patti Masterman 01 December 2009

Hanging upside down for periods of time seems to help reposition things..but the humiliation accumulated is killer. (smile)

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Fay Slimm 01 December 2009

So then Ken - you have transmigrated into a female brain have you? - - ha ha - a great little verse and which is nearer the truth than we ladies like to think - - a big 10 from Fay.

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Carol Gall 01 December 2009

a morning smile thanks 10

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Ying Escalona 01 December 2009

very funny Ken and you indeed carved smile on my face.......

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Ken e Hall

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