I thought of EvE, when ADAM trusted her
They were both banished, became so unpure
But they have made it, and mankind began
You and me here we are, we owe them one.
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Beautifully penned this poem about women... that is why I love them!
the true beauty of woman lies deep within the heart. She is the carrier of birth, the mother of creation. Long live the woman. excellent
You have written in praise of women's beauty and talent. Some for men too, perhaps? ? ?
I like your accuracy in words, a new vision. Very very good. We have to remember that. We are just women coming back to our history
@Adheez Van Der Beanthz- I thank you for sparing time for my poem. I love Athena too, but when I was writing this piece I thought of Hera who will represent a wife who is always jealous, funny though, but maybe I will find time to write about the strong and brainy Athena SOON. Again, thank you.
wow, this is brilliant i love the way you interpret the women in various forms although I am a little disappointed because you prefer to choose Hera rather than Athena : p but after all, this is a great poem thanks for sharing
ah, women, good piece, although some may not be a thing of beauty as they age.
Great piece. I can feel I am in this piece of art. Keep it up!
Love this...great flow....good choice of women, as we are all women...ha blessigns
Bravo...its brillant...I love the suttle ways you have incompossed the great women of the world...bravo.
youre a genius...i wish i could express myself that way....congratulations. this poem is great
wow...First time I read like this.. this is so nice to read...makes me smile... two thumbs up Naid, This is such a pleasure to read. sarap basahin ulit..smile...
wow...First time I read like this.. this is so nice to read...makes me smile... two thumbs up Naid, This is such a pleasure to read. sarap basahin ulit..smile...
Hhmmm.. it made me wonder on what category i belong to. this poem doesn't only describe women, it also stimulate our mind. Great write as always.. thank you.
Nice poem and and a good way to remember The strong women of the world.
i loved it especially the stanza about diana, princess of wales