Friday, August 8, 2008

Ah! Those Days Are Gone Comments

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When I was born
Born with a cry
And jingles all around
Ah! Those days are gone
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Asif Baloch
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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

'My first day of school Everyone saying I’m fool Crying for my mom Ah! Those days are gone' We loose evevry momont...from a zero to the another zero is our destination. Let's start to go...

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Shimon Weinroth 16 September 2008

poignant and nostalgic, those days are not really gone, they are etched in your memory, moreover you share them with us by writng the poem best wishes shimon

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 September 2008

No love to found- no love to be found. very good poem. Shanmugam. Have you read any of mine?

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Marvin Brato 08 August 2008

Quite explicit, life is a beginning and an end entwined! A 10

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