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thats really sweet, and an excellent poem. i like the style. keep it up.

A very emotional poem. u get 10++

Very touching. A smile is a wonderful gift. I wish you many smiles in 2009. Kind regards, Sandra

its a beautiful poem... i must say that i loved how it flow, simple and touches the heart... great work again Asif bhai...

ah! ! ! Asif, not on bended knee shall ask for light to set thee free, stand upright my fren wipe those tears and smile again for thou art free. BORN TO BE FREE Thou art born alone into this world come alone shall go alone with attachments none A+++and 10++ anjali