Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Ah Lord Eros Comments

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Ah Valentine that ferocious bum
Makes women swoon just for fun
Costs me a packet in cards and stamps
And the return is a kiss just to say thanks.
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Michael Gale 13 February 2007

Lips so wide and red as roses... My lovely lady wife so beautious in all of your poses. A pictured beauty i give you my life... You made me happy when you became my wife. I worship the ground you walk on... Please be my valentine and accept this gift i give to you- It's a pleasured love on, this hard stiffened hard on. Cupid's arrow sent you straight to my heart... That loved tipped dart makes us not to wantedly to from each other to ever to depart. A ring on a finger shows all my love for my lady, you... We are tender and only to each other as true as true. Your poem is a great tribute to love on Valentine's Day. Hadda givya a ten kind sir. God bless all poets-MJG.

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