Ah! Comments

Your poem has a rising tension of implosion of all the things around and of the inside (viscera) and it is accompanied by a human reaction, which is expressed by the exclamation'' ah''. The personification of the word is a great idea.Thank you for sharing this great poem.M.

I am the kiss that lights the night, I am the hope that looks like you., Ah! nice work.

Reaches the bottom of the barrel

Like it, short and to the point, a great write.