Wednesday, July 8, 2020

Agreeable Behavior Comments

Rating: 4.5

I adore You immensely
With great devotion
I ask You why You exhibit
A piercing look.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Michaelw1two 08 July 2020

Aloha and Cheers Tirupathi! Aah the abstractcreating seemingly of an individual yet leading forward in efforts to present a personal connection to the possibility a one divine entity... catching commentary on humanity not so humbly begging for forgiveness... kinda, sorta, maybe... A fine and profound wright Good Sir... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Aarzoo Mehek 08 July 2020

An introspect within is what we need sometimes To rule out the concequences of this world. May god forgive Our sins and accept our prayers. Beautiful poem.

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