Friday, May 23, 2008

Agony Of School Comments

Rating: 4.5

I walk through life,
Day-by-day.
Full of never-ending strife,
Void of my say.
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Cory Calder
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Wandering Scarlet 27 October 2008

reminds me of elementary school, not so mcuh now....but a little regards ROCCO

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Colin Jeffery 21 August 2008

I greatly enjoyed this poem - the memories of my schooldays. Brilliant work

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Effie Yalena Steyn 26 June 2008

This is really beautiful, I can relate to what you are saying a lot. But I tell you this, I swear it gets better. Keep writing- you're brilliant! Effie. xx

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i know how you feel with this poem, i get it to, no one understands me! ! ! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 June 2008

This is one fine job. I may take issue with the form of this poem, but I take no issue with anything else. What a wonderfully writen piece. I'm giving it a 9. GW62

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Joseph Poewhit 23 May 2008

One has to grow a bark as on a tree - though it can still be damaged

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