Wednesday, April 8, 2015

Agony Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a phantom -
restless and pale,
of a Gothic tale,
walks she in that fading eve,
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Roseann Shawiak 27 April 2015

Beauty in funeral flowers, portray8ing love that has died and stripped all music from a lover's life. Brilliant idea! Even funeral flowers die after a while, leaving their dried out petals upon paths where once they grew and blossomed, love having gone where those flowers went. Unique style, poignant feelings touching my heart. Great poem! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 26 April 2015

Beauty in funeral flowers, portraying love that has died and stripped all music from a lover's life, brilliant idea! ! . Even funeral flowers die after a while, leaving their dried out petals upon paths were once they grew and blossomed, love having gone where those flowers went. Unique style, poignant feelings touching my heart. Great poem! ! Thank you for sharing it! ! RoseAnn.

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Chinedu Dike 09 April 2015

Tragedy in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2015

Fallen tears to mirror only. Wonderfully drafted poem shared really. Nice job done.

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