Sunday, July 16, 2017

Agony Of First Love Comments

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The heart won't release the one
it loved first
The heart won't let go of the one
it first loved
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Qiniso Mogale
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Laurie Van Der Hart 06 August 2017

It's an excellent poem! Very powerful and cleverly written. By the way, my poem is about something quite different, although I totally understand why you connected these two. You see, she married her first love, and is still married to him.

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Dustin Dawin 18 July 2017

The agony of the first love lingers on enjoyed poem I will more...

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 July 2017

Great write. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Qiniso Mogale 17 July 2017

I thank you Jazib.

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