Thursday, July 11, 2013

Agony In A Theme Park Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m oft groping in the dark
why you no longer frequent
our favorite theme park
where you and I have spent
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Ferdinand L Quintos
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Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

Excellent poem,10/10. The theme park is now all bare, gone are its allure and glow, but I don’t as much as care, all this, I want you to know, because you’re no longer here. The agony has been well depicted. People in your shoes feel the melancholy in their hearts.

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Ferdinand L Quintos

Ferdinand L Quintos

Bayambang, Pangasinan, Philippines
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