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Sorry if I said anything wrong, somehow this poem reminds me a scene in FIRE...........Kulbhushan Karbanda does it, while his wife keeps looking at him................................helplessly..........
Imagination at large Only few lines to express Poetry at best...
Haiku is a wonderful form of poetry... just 3 lines n all is said.. just like u did... agony... rightly sees thru it..
a sad and stunning image you create there Mamta...speaking haiku...thanks...10
very touching...painful...realistic and vivid.. done in these three lines a whole cahpter... cheers
'shadows under his close eyes' W O N D E R F U L indeed! ! 10++++
Wow! Mama! This really tugged at my heartstrings. It has direct impact or should I say shock. The words are carefully chosen and I commend you in its composition. 10 Karin Anderson
With Faith In Hope For Peace! Maybe -... Beautiful potrayal Of love of pain Of life and death! Angel Ps - Thanks to Premji I came upon this first.
Though I can't be too sure, - there could be a brighter side, With help of those beads he could be praying for the salvation of some- bodys soul, - if not his, it could it be mine? ! 10! -Raj Nandy
MAMTAJI, usually i don't use capital letters........ but i have already used them for you!
This poem succeeds in creating the image in front of eyes; and reader is forced to think and re-think. It reminds me of saint kabir - dukh mein sumiran...... (mamta, plz read 'beads of rosary', time permitting.)