Agony Comments

The importance of the poem is the reason shown in the conclusion that is you are the responsible. well done.

I am not religious but I loved this, especially the last two lines you are the responsible/and stay beyond the sky. nice poem! ~mye3

Very nice poem. Keep on writing

Excellent poem with a beautiful message..You are responsible and stay beyond the sky. Loved reading it.

this is an excellent poem, keep up the good work..

A little polishing and it will be awesome :)

the good and bad is caused by our actions, if only most of us could learn from others and our own mistakes/ misfortune each day would be a little brighter, a lovely piece great job

good thoughts well expressed...

we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! !

we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! !

Using God's smiles to weave analogical metaphors is a great effort. Please comment on my works.

A lovely poem that many of us would agree with. Thanks for reading mine. Adeline

Every good thing come to the end and all pain shall come to the end when we reach the point of to be a humble human. We must not put so much of thought about the pain but find the reason in positive manner and guided by faith to ease those hurt. Very Good Poem.

I have just been writing about World War 1 and your poem dovetails neatly into those thought.

Amazing and a grand finale [last 2 lines] 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

The smile of God is so amazing.

Interesting poem, interesting writing. Great end. Very much I like it. (10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

God smiles with pleasant face I raised my agonies Why the earth filled with pain When it will finish.............love and pain..pain and happiness are are ingredients of His love and we must resepct it..Ity is His wish that we should undergo it and if we ca't understand than it is our fault.....10 lovely poem with very good message to human race......read mine i am disgrace...go back... pulled from deep sleep

Very reflective piece inspiring though now man does know of his own making did he suffered all the pains

I untied my worries Rachel Ann Butler