Thursday, November 7, 2013

Agony Comments

Rating: 3.5

I pay the dime that you spit
having me misunderstood for a long time
left out in the dark
while you are in the light
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Alesia Leach 02 November 2014

I could feel your agony. Nicely penned.

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Claudge Ben-at 14 October 2015

thank you mam.. :)

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

I feel the agony of the poem.You are so good. Pls visit my page

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Claudge Ben-at 14 October 2015

thank you Herbert for being there, correcting and appreciating my way of style. :)

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Maya Hanson 06 January 2014

I like this! original and true... ~mye3

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