Saturday, February 9, 2008

Agony..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was like a snake
Which gripped it's prey,
Trying to swallow it alive,
The pain in the mind
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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL
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Pregnant with pain yet bursting with beauty. A rare combination my friend! Well done! 10/10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

the description of agony was well written....

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Jing Jing 23 February 2008

very interresting piece of work....

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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