Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Agnostic-View (Mine) : God, You Blew It! (Or: God! You Blew It.) .... [believers Beware; Personal] Comments

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I think Heaven needs a new CEO, IF........ they want my soul.
They had me in their clutches once. Now Heaven’s not my goal.
In my church they preached “God is Love” and “Jesus is the Way”.
Then, as I grew older I saw the world for what it is, and...I no longer pray.
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Bri Edwards
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Laurie Van Der Hart 23 July 2017

Despite the content, Bri, this is a very cleverly written poem, and funny, of course, Yes, don't bother with the suit. There's no such thing as hellfire, never has been. I will pick up some of your points in a personal message.

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Paul Brookes 26 November 2013

Hilarious made me laugh I've added it to my fav poems but it has a serious message which your were able to convey with much wit and generousity loved it 10/10+ BB : O)

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Bri Edwards

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