Monday, March 13, 2006

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Rating: 4.8

There is nothing the matter with me.
I'm as healthy as I can be.
I have arthritis in both my knees
And when I talk, I talk with a wheeze.
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Bridgid Patrick
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Tailor Bell 21 October 2006

just cynical enough...an enjoyable read. -Tailor B.

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Poetry Hound 23 March 2006

Very clever. Great ending too. You're very good at these kind of poems.

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Lori Boulard 17 March 2006

funny, so funny. My dear Nanny (grandmother) would have stuck this to her fridge! Thanks for a light read and a good laugh.

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Hugh Cobb 13 March 2006

I laughed outloud at this one, Brigid. A fine and telling piece of verse. Personally, I take Omega-3 to hold-off the aches and pains I see in others all around me. And as one on the border of being old whose knees have ached more than a time or two I definitely get this one, but my teeth are still my own and my hair too. A very funny piece of light verse! Best, Hugh

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