Our aging eyes
cannot see
our beautiful world in clarity
our aging eyes
...
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The eyes are the most beautiful feature of a woman, especially in youth, I have written many poems on the eyes, they hold enchantment and mystery they can burn through a person or make a slave of a lover, but unfortunately..they do age but they can always carry hope, very good poem Aqua! !
Some things are there to see from heart thought body is becoming weak yet heart is young, with age every organ will be indifferent eventually. Liked it.10++
Thank you for this insightful reply...it is so true..we remain young inside.
A wonderful work...pragmatic expression on aging eyes! Happy to read your poem after a long gap! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10
Thank you my dear friend for your comments and yes, I am glad to be back to writing again.